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  1. Definitely a stalker in the making. I was getting upset with her for being in the affair, then it turns out her has gone wild and she wants to run with it! Felt like jogging on a Mobius strip.

    Gail’s 2016 April A to Z Challenge
    Theme: The Fun in Writing #235

  2. J Lenni Dorner

    J here, stopping by from the #atozchallenge – where I am part of Arlee Bird’s A to Z Ambassador Team.
    How has the first week of the challenge been for you so far? Are you meeting your goals of posting and hopping to other blogs?
    My blog still has a giveaway with bonus a to z challenges to encourage people to visit more stops. Thanks for your visit.
    jlennidornerblog.what-are-they
    Oooh, a nice, dark opening. Well done!

  3. Rian Durant

    That’s what I call determination! Great flash with a great twist. I love it. Just subscribed and I’m off to read what I have missed.

  4. Debbie, this makes for some fabulously reading for the lustful mind. 🙂 I like how the reality of it all was just a lustful fantasy. Hopefully, she’ll move on to another that more attainable with no attachments. This would be less complicated in life, but kinda dull for fiction. lol Thank you for visiting!

    ~Curious as a Cathy

  5. Sunni Morris

    I like the ending “only in my mind.” You could build on this story.

    Thanks for visiting my blog on the A to Z.

    Sunni

  6. I am in awe of your ability to structure an engaging work of fiction in as little as 100 words. Nicely done – and I look forward to reading more of them throughout the month.

  7. Hey Debbie 🙂 I loved the ending..what twists and turns 🙂 Happy blogging and all the best with the remaining posts.
    This is @sneha_sasi from Life As a Potpourri

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