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  1. Handbags and Snot Rags

    i need to know more 😬 I think you are going to have to write a bit more haha! Great short story thank you .

  2. Lady Nym

    Really enjoyed all three parts. And very brave of you to put them out there! Maybe I'll fish out some of my old short stories one day.

    #AnythingGoes

  3. Silly Mummy

    This was a brilliant short story! Very jealous of people who ca write fiction – I can never think of a good story! #anythinggoes

  4. Growing Up KaterTot

    OK, so I thought I commented on this post a few days ago, but apparently it never went through! I have to say that you threw me through a loop with this ending. The entire time I thought that it was Matt who was being tried in court, and then you flipped it over to the narrator. Brilliantly unexpected ending! Loved it! #AnythingGoes

  5. Cuddle Fairy

    So well written Debbie, it hooks you in & keeps you there. Love the end – was a good twist. #AnythingGoes x

  6. Eat.Love.Live

    This is great! I was on the edge of my seat reading this. I loved the twist at the end. I assumed it was about divorce at it was making me well up. Powerful writing! Kat x #twinklytuesday

  7. Melanie Greenhalgh

    I love reading short stories, because I never get time to read longer stories these days – thanks for sharing. #TwinklyTuesdays Mel xx

  8. Tracey Abrahams

    I loved this series of short stories, and would love to read some more as and when you write them. #Anythinggoes #TwinkleyTuesday

  9. Tracey Abrahams

    I loved this series of short stories, and would love to read some more as and when you write them. #Anythinggoes #TwinkleyTuesday

  10. Tracey Abrahams

    I loved this series of short stories, and would love to read some more as and when you write them. #Anythinggoes #TwinkleyTuesday

  11. Sarah Howe - Run Jump Scrap

    I need to go back and read the first 2 bits now!! It's good writing lovely. You got me gripped. A book now? xx #binkylinky

  12. Mudpie Fridays

    Wow this is great 🙂 – I am assuming it is a short story and not real life…. lol xx #momsterslink

  13. Emily Higgins

    Please let me know when your book is out! Would love to read it. Thanks for linking up to the #BinkyLinky

  14. Everything Mummy

    so well written I have just read this and now am going in for the other two sounds great! Thanks for linking up to #sundaystars

  15. Jenny Ripatti-Taylor

    Great ending I think we need the full book written and sold please??!!! lol Your a great writer. Thank you so much for linking up to Share With Me. #sharewithme

  16. Domesticated Momster

    Great way to end it. Sad thing is there are women in this world who know that their husband's are monsters and chose to love them anyway. Love your writing. Thanks for hosting #AnythingGoes. I am way behind in commenting as I have been doing some family time in the evenings.

  17. Thanks so much for sharing this, you are such a talented writer, I am very jealous!! Good luck with your book but I think this should all be put together and out there for the world! Thanks so much for linking up with #TwinklyTuesday

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